June 28, 2004

sams a mass seamless mess

tough to read the subject wasnt it!,
"DAMN HE'S N A FIT!!
rhyme ,reproduce ,breed! its there see!!
WHY IN HELL IS HE RANTING THUS??
part of our creed , our lives ? are they free??
OK HE'S LOST IT! DEFINETELY!!!
why we go on regardless of monotony or purpose???
SAMMO/SUSHANTH:DOES INTROSPECTION BECKON SWEETLY
who else must read must discuss ??i know not
WE ALL LIKE THIS ONE ...ITS HOOOOOOOOOOOT


MESSY LAYERED RHYMES =HEAVY CRITICISM

1 comment:

Rhymonster said...

DUDES HOPE U LIKE THIS OK
AND ANYONE I KNOW NOT IS WELCOME TO POST DESTRUCTIVE ANTICRITICISM(((DUH!!! HEAD HURTS)))